Sound Video feedback and learner response

Sound Video feedback and learner response




Teacher feedback:
WWW: - effective parallel bond
              - dramatic + matches sound effect
              - tension  (Diegetic sound)


Good transition between scene 

Same score repeated twice:
-effective contrast
-creates sense of absurdly humour

EBI: Smoother ending
        

Student feedback:

1)  WWW: Good choice of music for parallel sound
                   Good idea to use two different sound techniques for the same scene
                  
EBI: More variety of upbeat sounds would be a good choice.


2)  WWW: Good use of contrapuntal and parallel sounds.
                  Good transition between the sound

EBI : Resolution of the clips don't fit the resolution of the video. Could use different clips for both types of sound. Smoother ending could be included.


3) WWW: Parallel sound really fits in with the scene and sounded if it was part of the film

EBI: Contrapuntal sound could have been better picked.


4) WWW: Explored both contrapuntal and parallel sound.
                  Good use of a transition.

EBI: The contrapuntal sound didn't fit as well as the parallel sound. 
         Try to use different clips.
         Smoother ending.

5) WWW: Good use of parallel and contrapuntal sound.

EBI: Try a different clip. 
         Transition was too long.


6) WWW: Good use of parallel sounds
                  Good use of contrapuntal sounds

EBI: Shorter/different clips.

7) WWW: Good use of the sound track to portray parallel and contrapuntal sound.
                  The use of the same scene shows a clear contrast.

EBI:  Use a wider range of clips 
          Contrapuntal sound doesn't fit with the scene.


Own Feedback:

WWW: The clip I used was good
              The action music in the background matched the clip.
               The transition was edited good.

EBI:  If the video was more short.
          If the contrapuntal sound wasn't too comical and far-fetched
          If I used more clips for the contrapuntal sound clip.

I think the best clip was Jagraj's as it included a good example for both parallel sound and contrapuntal sound and the music used matched well with the clips shown.


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