Cinematography LR

WWW: Excellent cinematography- especailly opening shot

Good location

Smooth camera movement 

Good POV shot


EBI:

"Shoulder view"???

Should be one minute


1) WWW: Sound track added tension for the audience

Range of camera angles and movement

Good use of location

EBI: Label clips correctly


2) WWW: Presented the shots before

EBI: Focus on the camera


3) WWW: POV was nice and smooth

EBI: Repeated shot used


4) Good use of camera shot and editing

EBI: You repeated a shot twice and labelled it differently.


5) WWW: Good quality cinematography, good scenery,  title before each shots

EBI: Make video longer, labelling


6) WWW: Good variety of camera shots, good use of transitions and music

EBI: Should be one minute


7) WWW: Good pan movement, good quality

EBI: Fix glitchy aspect, think about labelling.


I should have made the video 1 minute but also need to make sure that my video is fully rendered before I upload it to Youtube so that it doesn't appear distorted.

Next time I will include different shots and also make it longer than this video. Also, I don't need to include that many transitions and rather focus on one consistent that appears on all of the videos.

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